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~For You~ (Acrostic Sedoka)

Forever in dreams
Our hearts following the flow
Romantic desires create

Yet I need to write
On every page we combine
Until tonight I am yours

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  • shysky
    April 3, 2007
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    *gentle smile* Our dreams are the beginning and end for us. The rising and setting of the sun, the alpha and the omega. Our dreams give us wings and the courage to move on with each new day. The need to write is compelled by the beauty found within. Absolutely perfection.


    ~A Heart's hope lies with belladonna~


  • HerbalGoat
    March 31, 2007

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    Very touching, very sensual, very loving, full of emotion, etc.. I could go on forever, but I won't. I really enjoyed this piece. Thanks so much for taking my challenge.


  • Blueskywonder
    March 31, 2007

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    This is a touching sensual piece full of heart felt passion. A true pleasure to read Angel. Well done... thankyou for sharing such lovely thoughts with us.


  • Freed Man
    March 28, 2007

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    well this is not your best but it is stll good. keep up the good work.I really didn't get the gist of it but i'm sure you will tell me.,