Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Fallen Angel

A wonderful life up in the skies
Only to fall back down again
The life of one fallen angel
Being washed down a drain

Her life keeps her busy
Her mind always back and forth
Lost loved ones and academic work
Mixing together and heading north

A love she thought she had inside
Crashed away when he came
Down to her place of residence
Where she felt nothing but shame

She hopes one day to rise again
But until that fateful day
The angel remains hurt and fallen
Until her troubles are washed away

Author notes

A metaphor about a person who had been feeling down recently

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    March 28, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    hmmmmm, i think she will raise again, thou they have fallen from the sky i think that soon all angels raise again, this is a great poem, keep it flowing