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Farewell

So unwanted are the nightmares
But this time I sent to heavens my prayers
That I want to see the bitter reality of my life
Turning into a nightmare.

So many times I've woke up in my bed
Suffering because of intolerable dread
Sweating in fear
and trying to forget the nightmare.
But everytime my dreads used to run away
When I heard you saying " I'm okay."

This time nothing of that sort will happen
I've to endure the pain
Of living without you
In the vast ocean of sorrow
Without you lonely and hollow.

I know you had to go
But my heart can follow
You, like your shadow
So you are never far
We'll remain together
Till eternity.

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  • MissAnonymous
    March 29, 2007
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    Thank you for entering. Great write!


  • Romily
    March 28, 2007

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    This time nothing of that sort will happen
    I've to endure the pain
    Of living without you
    In the vast ocean of sorrow
    Without you lonely and hollow.



    great lines though in simple expression!

    • Shapla
      March 29, 2007
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      Thanks a lot for reading. you've chosen my fav lines. anyways thanks again.