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Snow

all alone in my savanna room the time stands still
and euphoric echoes of a subtle purring are spawned
by misunderstood cheetahs frozen in between a split second
while fog surrounds their faces and outside
is still snowing.... 

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  • white stone
    March 26
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    What is the sound of a platypus slapping a wet cheetah??...


  • Snappy - Doodles
    March 28, 2007

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    Very intriguing. Message is a good expression of interesting and creative superb words. Imagery very real. Nicely penned piece.

    ~Snappy~