Bobbing and swimming along
on the bottom of the sea.
Life in the sea is peacful and calm
the sounds and motions are soothing.
Waves push you this way and that,
Fish of all shapes, sizes and colours
float around on the tides.
Many things to explore in the sea.
Caves, mountains and more.
Strange looking plants
wave at me as I swim past.
I take a peek at the one nearest.
This one seems to be glowing!
Who would not want to live here?
Who could ever ask for more.
A contest entry
- Give It all you've Got (pre writes allowed) by Dark Whispers.
318 points, ended March 31, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I feel like I've read some of your work before and know with more time you could write and extrordinary poem, but this is stil very nice. good job.
thank you for entering and best of luck in my contest.
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