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spider man

spiderman fought  with super man
in front of phantom
I stood amazed
not knowing
right or left

all have masks
of their own

I have no mask
so I bother not
who will win

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  • lemon meringue pie
    March 28, 2007

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    i like this poem its siple which i like. bu t the ending doesnt really work but i likei t.