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Lifes Choice

A choice in life
No grief or strife
A choice to make
Which path to take
Roads split in two
But which one for you
Each holds appeal
But which is the deal
A world so wide
Some avenues hide
Avenues not yet discovered
Some options still uncovered
A million ideas
A couple of fears
But overall
If you trip and fall
Choosing the wrong path
You can still have a laugh
Then try another
You’ll soon recover

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  • second-born
    November 10, 2007
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    “Roads split in two
    But which one for you
    Each holds appeal
    But which is the deal…” this stanza was so lovely…a perfect fit to the theme of the contest…though I think you’re poem needs punctuation I commend you for writing with flawless simplicity and sincerity…thank you for sharing your poem…