It’s such a nice place,
Where everyone’s wearing a smiling face
Because it is such a dream comes true
To be at last, out of the blue
To hear the birds singing,
To see the blue skies above,
It is all what I’ve been dreaming
That all things be filled with love!
I know that these is what they call a paradise,
For I see a dead loved one rise!
The one I’ve always wanted to see,
And will be forever here with me!
The Almighty really have His word,
That His love for us won’t mean the end of the world,
But He shall put judgment to the wicked,
And to the new earth, we shall all live!
Based from Rev 21:1-4
A contest entry
- Dalaney 5 Love and Romance by Sue Cardwell.
650 points, ended July 13, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dear Departed Friend by Misty Melody.
850 points, ended September 13, 2008, 78 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thanks for entering my contest sorry it took so long to comment. I have been dealing with a lot. Thanks for you words of peace to me. Thanks, Melody
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Thank you for your entry in our contest, an interesting read, but your rhyming is not good...word and world do not rhyme, and the last two lines have no rhyme at all.
With a little more practice you will improve and we look forward to seeing an entry in our next contest...Sue and Jeff
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