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Fused, Liquefied, Melted

Melted together is how we are
No lines or boundaries detectable
Where one ends and another begins
No one is able to discern~

I'm melted into you
And it's where I want to stay
Totally satisfied
With my place next to you

Fused, liquefied, melted
With you~

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  • Falling2Fast123
    May 29, 2007

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    this is a wonderful poem it shows images in a short few lines and at the same time it has as much emoction that you would get from a 20 lined poem i love it


  • sunny day
    April 1, 2007

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    Awe Inspiring!!!!!!!!

    Vickie, I had seen this and bookmarked it because I didn't have time to comment at that moment. I am totally awed by this piece you have done. You captured the artwork brilliantly and brought it to life with your words so profound. I melted into this piece as I read on. As short as it is it spoke of true love felt by two who become as one. Absolutely fantastic. Kudos for you my dear friend. Thank you for sharing this masterpiece with all of us. Love ya my friend, Joyce


  • Samplette gold member
    March 29, 2007

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    Hot, hot, hot....sizzling. A tastful write for a WOW picture. Glad something got your muse a kicking. This is a great write girlie.
    Sam

  • EncounteredEpiphany
    March 29, 2007

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    Warm

    I'm melted into you
    And it's where I want to stay
    Totally satisfied
    With my place next to you

    Fused, liquefied, melted
    With you~

    Lo-Amo

    Salute!!!!!


  • CountryCousin
    March 28, 2007

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    Yep this is good.

    I think that you did reach down and capture the essence of the graphic. That was very lovely and you did a fine job on it.


  • Sherry gold member
    March 28, 2007

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    Whew!

    Whew lovely writing different but pure
    passion fantastic filled with
    love and intimacy.
    Your muse surely came alive in this one
    with the picture you go Vickie. ~Sherry~


  • Janice M Pickett
    March 27, 2007

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    wowwww

    Hi vickie
    Just popped by and saw this. Very inventive and really good. Nice to see you still turning out top class poetry. LOL
    Hugs
    Jan


    • Vickie J
      March 27, 2007
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      Thanks, Janice!!! Long time~huh? I imagine you are just as busy if not more so than me. Glad to see that you still visit the site-I'll have to see what you've been penning these days~


  • Luna Tique Fringe
    March 27, 2007
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    This is very sweet..


  • Cannonsfire
    March 27, 2007
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    I thank you for sa lovely entry


    • Vickie J
      March 27, 2007
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      Well thank you for providing the inspiration. I never have time to enter contests, but for some reason clicked on yours and it moved me to pen something.
      Hope you get many good entries!

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