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when he sings

He opens his mouth -
the maples hold back the wind
to listen.

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  • BlueNote27
    July 12, 2008
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    I had forgotten all about this.


  • Angelflower
    April 9, 2008

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    This was really good. simple small like a senyru is supposed to be... all in all I like it.. ;-)
    Peace to you,
    Jetleena

  • Trew
    August 6, 2007
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    That's gooooood!

  • ecrivain01
    March 28, 2007

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    Must be quite a voice.

    Very nice senyru. I didn't know you wrote them.

    I have a haiku in a contest right now, but don't expect to win the contest.


    • Claide
      March 28, 2007
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      Is THAT what this is?

      I had no clue I wrote them either

      • ecrivain01
        March 28, 2007
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        Hmmmmm.

        You've independently invented a poetry form that took the Japanese thousands of years? Pretty good, eh?


  • PsydewaysTears gold member
    March 28, 2007
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    how attentive of them... and you. this is awesome

  • marrow
    March 27, 2007
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    interesting in a confined space. peaceful, too.
    j

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