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Heart{Broken} And Alone

Sitting here with these thoughts surrounding,
Feeling so empty day after day, my heart pounding.
Roaming these empty halls of the drama-filled academy,
Which are all a blizzard of empty faces that cannot be seen.
Faces with no meaning, faces with no words,
Faces covered by masks, worn by all the girls and boys.

I push them all away, keeping my feelings inside.
I hide deeply in these shadows made from every single lie.
Hide my tears when I wish to cry them for hours more,
Bite my arm as I feel the shakes coming on once more.
Screaming from this pain, this twisted reality,
Never held within arms, Never again set free.

Cry these tears that stain my heart black as the darkest night.
Scream out in the darkness out of terror and fright.
Nightmares surrounding the flesh, that razor oh so near.
What more is there left of me, what more should I fear?

Drip, drip, drip, the sound of my bleeding heart,
Drip, drip, drip, how much longer will I be falling apart?
Stained as these nightmares swarm around my very soul,
Unable to stand all the events of both new and old.

Memories, flashbacks, all of that which I pray to forget,
Knock me up side my head so I would feel no more regret.
Help me now, Hold me here, This I pray to thee.
Can't you see what it is you've all done to me?

You came upon my heart and soul and held me as I cried,
But when I feel I need you most, you immediately cast me aside.
Leave me here, stranded and alone, crying in the dark.
Can't you see what's happening, that your actions on my soul mark?

Here I sit the livelong day, alone and becoming worse.
Stranded, bleeding, crying, as I'm affected by this curse.
My heart bleeds through the night as I wait here for one,
But here I sit forever marked, Heartbroken and alone.

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  • Megan Awesome
    October 18, 2007

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    Wow. This is so good and sadly relatible. My ex boyfriend was an ass ... but I've found someone else. But I love this. The only problem I have with it is that I was looking for a LOVE poem. Not a heart break break up poem. But it's still very good. Great poem. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!!!
    Megan


  • ExpectingMommy18
    October 9, 2007

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    this poem was lovely it is sad but you did a wonderful job with this peice i wish you the best of luck and thank you so much for entering the contest


  • xxlisajazminexx
    September 30, 2007

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    BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN WITH MUCH EMOTION AND SADNESS
    THANK YO FOR ENTERING INTO THE CONTEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • Maili Knephthan gold member
    March 28, 2007

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    Here I sit the livelong day, alone and becoming worse.
    Stranded, alone, crying, as I'm affected by this curse.
    My heart bleeds through the night as I wait here for one,
    But here I sit forever marked, Heartbroken and alone.





    That was my favorite stanza. I know how it feels to be all alone and heartbroken. This was an incredibly deep write I really like it alot. Thank you so much for sharing this piece and keep them coming they are really good.


  • Silent.enigma
    March 28, 2007

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    Great Write

    i love this poem. especially the lines:

    "Drip, drip, drip, the sound of my bleeding heart,
    Drip, drip, drip, how much longer will I be falling apart?"

    is this about who i think it is? o.o jw. i lilke it though. it really makes me think of life and how it's turned out...
    i think it's your best so far. as a matter of fact, im gonna bookmark it. ((i hope that's okay with you))

    <3 Brit


    • Silly Rabbit.
      March 28, 2007
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      Lemme guess, your guess is Jake? Or Corey? Meh. A little of both, a little about everyone. =/


  • Nanette
    March 28, 2007

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    This is a beautiful poem, very sad though. It is heartbreaking to know that people feel this way. Never let the lack of the involvement of people in your life defines your happiness!! We have the power to change how we perceive our lives....if this is yours, I really hope that you find the contentment you are looking for!!
    Well done with this beautiful write - keep spilling your emotions in such a wonderful way!!

  • Tweeky
    March 28, 2007
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    swell

    it is a great poem i think every 1 should read it


  • Cannonsfire
    March 28, 2007

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    You pen this in the language of your own thoughts, a narrative that gives the reader a chane to be in your shoes, feel the pain and view the images you pertain to, strong and powerful.


  • neurosine gold member
    March 28, 2007

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    This is a really well put together piece. The ideas and words are so common. They're put together though in a very specific way. Good work.


  • cryin-girl
    March 28, 2007
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    hey this is a really nice descriptive truthful peom

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