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[ In his domain ]

In his domain
o'er this wintry wood
Harsh winds breaking
all who would
come to know him

A traitorous plain
A long time to find
Who he might be
to realize his kind
his nature

But all in vain
none can beat back
his indifferent fury
a heart painted black
no sign of light

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  • Dark Whispers
    April 1, 2007

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    you should title it Heart Painted Black. Great poem, written with strong words. thanks for entering, and best of luck.