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Mother Earth

Lost  deep in my mind beneath a shady tree
Suddenly awakened by the buzzing of a bee
Feeling  a warm gentle breeze blow pass
Smelling the sent of fresh cut grass

Seeing the blue sky with clouds way on high
Butterflies fluttering in the sun just learning to fly
Flowers blooming from long winter rest
Every thing new from mother earth breast

Off in the distance the sky becomes black
Mighty flash of light in the sky in the back
From a long distance a thunderous roar
Earth awakens it no longer snores                 

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  • FifthDove
    March 28, 2007
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    I knew shady trees were good for morethen getting out of the hot sun


  • Alilly silver member
    March 27, 2007
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    This poem sounds like heaven to me, I just can't wait for that sunshine Good going


  • queen Moderators member
    March 27, 2007
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    Sounds like a perfect way to spend an afternoon