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I Wish

i wish
happy
fun
nice
shiny
love
  was possible.

i wish i wasn't
torn
hurt
confused
lost
sad
  anymore

i wish people
understood
appreciated
knew
listened
cared
  of me

i wish i could
forget
unlearn
not know
ignore
stop
  it all

but wishes
are just wishes
nothing but
hopes
dreams
yearnings
  dashed against
  the cold concrete

  of life.

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  • infinite spirit
    March 28, 2007

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    sad, yes. depressing, yes. beautiful, yes. im off to write something angsty and emo. i shall return. have a flower


  • Random Lily
    March 28, 2007
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    *sighs again* this was a really sad and depressing poem...but really good. i like it a lot. but damnit, shiny love is possible! it has to be! right? cause if all those things aren't possible...how good can the future be? *becomes hysterical* aaaah! right. calming down now.


    • black rose spirit
      March 28, 2007
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      amusingly, i didnt actualy mean that shiny love was impossible. i meant that happy, fun, nice, shiny, and love (all seperately) were impossible. i just realized it could be taken to mean that all the adjectives describe love, but they werent written to. though i guess it works that way too. ^_^ and i dont really believe theyre impossible.. just wrote it.