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Neglect (Acrostic)

I walk through life day by day
Missing something precious

Such a beautiful friend to have
Only I didn't realize at the time
Rejection was slowly setting in
Redefined priorites caused a loss
Yet I didn't see it until now

Full of life and love, you are
Of higher quality than all
Reaching for the stars always

Nothing hurts more than this
Everything just makes me wish
Goodness could come back to me
Life is harder without you
Each day I pray for your return
Can fate be so cruel to me?
Tell me what I need to do
In order to win back your trust
Never did I intend to be like this
Gone are my days of happiness

Your life is inspiration to me
One of a kind is what you are
Unsung hero of my world

Author notes

DraconicPhantom

To someone very special in my life, whom I've let slip away recently. I'm so sorry.

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  • CountryCousin
    March 29, 2007

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    I know the feeling.

    This is how life goes sometimes when we let something go that we did not intend to. Or they are taken before we are ready to let them go. You made a lovely write here full of sincere emotion.

  • in-the-twilight
    March 27, 2007

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    I don't know what to say! I hate that we drifted this far apart... I miss what we had... and I feel guilty for making you upset when you have Kim... it's just... I don't even know anymore. You know how I feel... maybe that's why it never got far with Seth... I was stuck in the past... ! Damn it... now I'm crying... and I just wish it was back to last year... before all this happened... but fate was never on our side and we knew that. But I always have that wish... and you asked what to do to regain my trust... I do trust you... it's just that everytime I log in and see you were on while I wasn't... I cry that I didn't get a message... when I messaged you earlier and didn't get a reply... it breaks my heart and I wish it didn't but it does. But I don't want to change you and I no it wont change at all. You know my heart and I wish I knew yours... Great write! Thanks for entering! Rock on! xoxo Meg