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Falling

Falling in
i'm
slipping
wont be
much longer now
till i
go
i
cant stop
i'm losing
the game
not to death
but
supression
it's just too
much too
hard
to deal
so
i just
wont
anymore
time to

forget.

Author notes

I'm not really.. just felt it. so i wrote it.

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  • Random Lily
    March 28, 2007

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    *sighs* i hope you don't actually give up. that'd be a scary day. but i really like this poem...it's kinda choppy and strange, but it's...appealing. interesting.