It was just like yesterday, when I remember the way we danced
The way we kissed and hoped
And laughed
It was just like tomorrow, still coming to us slow
But we'll hold out for it
'Cause it's the only one we know
It was just like yesterday, when I remember the way we danced
The way we kissed and hoped
And laughed
It was just like last year, when I thought I wouldn't keep on going
But you were the wind beneath my wings
The cheer that kept me going
It seemed like only yesterday, when we first fell in love
And it seems that the road we take
Is the one that keeps us strong
I think that someday I'll look back nd see those memories
Even then I'll probably wonder
Why did I ever leave?
It was just like yesterday when I remember the way we danced
The way we kissed and hoped
And laughed
It seems just like yesterday too bad that it's past
I still miss those good old days
The way we kissed and laughed
A contest entry
- Music Titles Contest by Welcome-To-Hell.
875 points, ended April 12, 2007, 7 entries
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Comments
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I love this poem WOO, when i get round to it i will comment better but this will have to do. its a brilliant poem with lots of rhyme it really shows your longing for that kiss again and that person so its so emotion had me in tears
. anyway i love the rhyme and the structure and the wording with the repeated stanza was brill.
keep writing and ill read
kelbornro
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This is interesting I'm not quite sure why you repeated that same stanza more then once aside of that well written best of luck to you in the contest
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this is really really good i love the repetitive use of that one stanza
It was just like yesterday, when I remember the way we danced
The way we kissed and hoped
And laughed
it eorked really well well done j
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