I hate the way you act like you don't care,
I hate it when you tell me that things will be the same,
I hate your stupid head band,
and I hate how stubborn you are.
I love what we share,
I love how you walk around without shame,
I love it when I hold you hand,
and I love how your my shining star.
All is fair in love and war,
which seems to be what we're at most of the time.
I don't want to lose you baby
even if you tell me that I won't.
I don't want to do this anymore,
I'm getting alittle to old to climb.
But for now, just maybe
I'll still love you even if you don't.
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Yet another reason why I don't write poetry. It doesn't really flow, or make much sence but I was just writing what came to mind. I had a fight with Courtney and this is what comes of it.. Woah, thats shitty.
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very well written
We definitely need to talk about all of this.
I like the whole poem, even though it made me cry. -
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It wasn't meant to make you cry. It was just the truth.
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FLOW IS NOT EVERTHING, THE EMOTIONS IN THE POEM ARE WHAT COUNTS AND YOU FEEL ALL THE RAW EMOTIONS!!!!!WELL DONE FIGHTS SUCKS AND IT IS GOOD THAT YOU GOT YOUR FEELING OUT!!!!!
I hate the way you act like you don't care,
I hate it when you tell me that things will be the same,
I hate your stupid head band,
and I hate how stubborn you are.
I love what we share,
I love how you walk around without shame,
I love it when I hold you hand,
and I love how your my shining star.
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Thank you so much!!!! *ish bursting with pride*
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Wow... Brittany... this isn't bad at all. The way you set it up was great... you showed your hatred in the first stanza and your love in the second. LOL at line three... hahahaha. And my favourite two lines are nine and ten. This is so personal, yet really great. I'm not lyin'!
♣Kevan♣
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Thanks a lot Kevan.
It means a lot to mean for you to say that. You managed to bump up my mood. ♥ Thanks a million!
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