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Without you

I've never felt this way before
So Insecure
So helpless
and lost
Like I feel when I think
Of what I'd be without you

Please tell me what you think

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  • Nephalaneous lover
    April 12, 2007

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    good write

    i know that feeling, been there, done that, and got a t-shirt too,...lol..seriously i know the feeling of "what i'd be with out you", its not a plesant feeling, but does happen...good poem!


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    March 27, 2007

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    Sounds scary. It's so easy be insecure. We tend to lean on people. It's not all bad that way though. It's best when they lean back.