Written By Lisa Morris
My blood spills over for the tears I cry
My heart can find no salvation
The pain inside my bleeding heart
Of others raining expectations
The sorrow I feel inside my heart
Penetrates my lonely soul
My world had decended into darkness
And now I linger down below
I can no longer live in fantacy
Of the things I couldn't keep
My life has lost all meaning now
And forever I will weep
The Misty Mountains is where I'll go
And dance among the clovers
I say goodbye to the world once passed
And now watch my blood spill over
Author notes
If only Feelings didn't hurt so bad. The heart will not be perfect untill it can be made unbreakable.
A contest entry
- CHOP-SUI(CIDE) by Nephalaneous lover.
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Comments
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So sorrow lead to your suicidal thoughts? At least it has something of what I was looking for. Thanks.
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nice write, great job, nicely done, good luck in contest
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Wow..this is wonderful. You have captured some sad moments here and made them beautiful. If you understand what I mean. For even though dark they create such a tale..one that lures the reader in and makes them feel. Pain is a universal feeling that should rear its head less and less. Wonderful write and best of luck to you in the contest.
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great poem. i like this poem
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