Clip the Wings that get you High
Drink the Poisened Lulaby
Forget all the Truthful Lies
I set you Loose and Said Goodbye
Knowing that you would Die
Thinking of that makes me Cry
Realy Thought you could Fly
But you Sat and Wondered Why
While I Flew Away in the Blue and Red Sky
When you gave it a Try
Your Wings Broke so you Fell and Died
Now I Sit and Cry
Author notes
i wrote about an odd dream i had. i was a small red bird and there was a crow in a cage with the door wide open, i was flying around and the crow tryed to fly but some1 shot it and it died...TwistedDreams is my trade mark. NO TAKE-IES!!!!
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Sad write. Good rhyming flow. The poem made me think of how a person might feel if someone close to them were to die suddenly and if they had the feeling before the time came, but if they chose to do nothing about it. Interesting dreams you have. Good write. Keep writing.
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To Zab,
Thanks Zab, i have waaay to many Interesting dreams, want one? how 'bout a dozen?
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