Her thoughts and her mind
are an emotional mess,
but she lives day by day
trying to fake a smile the best.
She is slowly realizing
she can not do it another day,
she's losing herself to the fear
and she is slowly slipping away.
Each breathe that she inhales
is a stab to the heart,
because she wants to give up so badly
she just wants to restart.
But she can't win the battle
and she has nothing left to say,
it is her final hour now
because she will allow herself to slip away.
Author notes
Option #7. Slipping Away
A contest entry
- Anything for Anyone (come have a look!) by I-Feel-weightless.
450 points, ended April 1, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - { depression/ suicide} by Angel Eyed Baby.
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I love this,youve captured how I feel perfectly.
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I'm glad you liked it, thank you.
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Good write, I can relate. Thank you for entering and good luck!
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Thanks alot
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