Those candy necklaces & teddy bears seem
too o,v,e,r,r,a,t,e,d so lets go back to when I
was ten so things like this didnt feel so much like
scrapping your knees against the concrete
Back then you didn't have to worry
about s/h/a/t/t/e/r/e/d ribs & cellar orgasms
Darling;; all I ever wanted was to be loved
by you and only you
[forever]
But all you see through your blue eyes
are those [short] skirted sluts who
bargin foreplay for >reputations<
Baby;; forget being your dirty {little} secret;
I'm going to spread you thin and e.x.p.l.o.i.t.
those backseat break downs.
So Smile for the camera boy;;
because these photobooth memories
don't mean a single [fucking] thing to me
Author notes
thank you for the help Aj
ily =]
♥
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DarlingUnwrapMexx
lithium
A contest entry
- && I'll Be Your Pretty Little Fuck-Up♥ by love tank x.
1050 points, ended April 17, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Raw, raw, raw... But relatable. I felt each word and each streak of pain within this, as some of this is my life, or the pain side of it anyway. Darling written ♥
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beautiful
I heard alot of poems but nothing like this every good keep it up
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fucking stunning..
best of luck. -
OHhh LOVE IT BEHBEH!!!!
"Those candy necklaces & teddy bears seem
too o,v,e,r,r,a,t,e,d so lets go back to when I
was ten so things like this didnt feel so much like
scrapping your knees against the concrete"
I really love the begining, something about it just rubs the right way!!!
Dahling you are an amazing writer, and a dirrtypretty princees by blood!
I love it doll!!!
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wow babe, this is fucking stunning,
it blew me away and kept my head spinning!
in a very good wayy of course!
i loveeeee you! -
this is completey a.m.a.z.e and I loved it all
Baby;; forget being your dirty {little} secret;
I'm going to spread you thin and e.x.p.l.o.i.t.
those backseat break downs.
But that was probably my favoruite bit
doll you're so talented
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ohh this was awesome! you are so getting better at this love
But all you see through your blue eyes
are those [short] skirted sluts who
bargin foreplay for >reputations<
that blewww my mind out of the water. good luck on this hunny bun
[♥]
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only because Aj helped
=]
♥
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fabulous
this is so fabulous babe! I absolutely love it! every part of this is my favorite part of it...its so perfect!
X-GlitterBabyDoll-X
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Oh wow;;;
I have so many favorite parts to this:
"was ten so things like this didnt feel so much like
scrapping your knees against the concrete"
"because these photobooth memories
don't mean a single [fucking] thing to me"
This is really good, and it was nice of Aj to help you =] Thanks for entering babe<3333
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Of course this is great =]
&& I must say :
"because these photo booth memories
don't mean a single [fucking] thing to me"
I Can most def Relate to those lines.
I♥you
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