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Temporal Interiors

A most expert climbed the tower
centrally located social reality drift mine
stout tunnels through the air and land
three times the thickness beyond

In effluency of proper raving
tough sharp shards grow
assonance of plentiful egression
shaping reason from within

While nothing without
reamains like dark dreams of turmoil
troubled building vectors with externalities
reciprocals of unanticipated stresses
allocations of entropy sent to keep order

Inside.

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  • beryl
    October 4, 2007
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    I like it

    I really like your verses and totally agree with your social standing on recent events, but I worry about your use of language.  Is it too much?  I don't mean to seem too critical, but I would just like to see that your message is widely recieved. Sorry again if I'm being too forward, regards, B.