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Friends Again?

I close my eyes and remember the day we met
I know it is something I will never forget
Something about you caught my attention
Your apparent fury filled me with aphrehension.

You were dressed all in black, from head to toe
and at the time there were things that I didn't know
I pulled away slightly, I admit I was scared
you changed my life though I wasn't prepared.

Hun, I'd liked to take the time to say
I'm sorry I've done things to push you away
I'm pushy, I'm bossy, I'm mean and I'm rude
I'll have to acquiesce that I can be a bit crude.
You're angry and violent, I still have the scars
And you know sometimes I'd like to blast you to mars.
You get on my nerves and I can infuriate you
You know what I'm saying is completely true.

I think its time we called this quits!
Lets, each one of us, decide to commit
to vauling our friendship above all this stuff
Because, really, I've just had enough.

I love you so much, you know it, and whether you like it or not
No matter how mad you get, you still love me a lot.
No more bickering or fighting about who is right
Can't we just accept the faults and be friends tonight?

Author notes

I've been fighting with my friend again. Its one of those things where we spend way too much time together that all out little pet peeves add up and add up until we blow.

Michele, I don't want to fight anymore. Can we just be friends again??

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  • Papyrus
    April 5, 2007

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    right-on

    I hope it works out for you. I know what that is like, spending too much time with friends. At least there was no element of jealousy in the poem. I know what that it like too. Pretty stupid really. I hope it works out!
    Thanx-Papyrus


    • ChildeOfChaos
      April 6, 2007
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      Thanks for you comment and your well wishes. I appreciate both. My friend and I are doing alright


  • Old Fool
    March 29, 2007

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    This just summs up what friendship is all about.. Understanding and Forgiving.
    Excellently written, well presented. I Love it!
    Respect
    x
    Evert {o!-}


  • March 28, 2007
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    ... I love you lots and I don't want to fight any more either. I hate it when we do. *HUG*


  • Dark Whispers
    March 28, 2007

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    this is a sweet poem and wonderfully put together and well written to; there were two errors you should fix.
    eccellent poem .great job.

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