i was depressed the other day,
no one would help me look at life a different way,
now i am gone and nobody cares,
life has so many scares,
wish you were here,
with me in hell,
this life is full of shit,
from my life, you can probably tell,
i hate that boy,
who couldn't be a man,
and tell me that we were over,
through my best friend,
i cryed all night, all alone,
when the dawn came on,
i found myself alone,
finally i guess i have realized what's up,
he wasn't who i thought he was,
and so we broke up,
tell me the truth i beg of you now,
wish me a broken dream,
to let me scream,
and let me die,
i will not try,
anymore.
A contest entry
- EMO STUFF ONLY!!! I WANT TO FEEL YOUR PAIN by xlilliexdiesx.
660 points, ended May 9, 2007, 31 entries
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Beautiful. It's so desperate. I love i
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I love it you did a good job.my favorite part was i hate that boy, who couldn't be a man. thanks for entering
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wow. this is really good. i loved it. you did an awesome job with the rhyming. the flow of the poem was very very good. What the poem was saying was very good too. you are a very good writer =) keep up the very very good work. my favorite part was i hate that boy, who couldn't be a man. <-i'm glad you put that in.
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