Waiting for your return
I wonder WHAT MIGHT HAVE BEEN
As I watch the clock's hands turn
Knowing my temper is my DISEASE
Baby please come HOME
I need you so
Don't leave me alone
We can go SOMEWHERE ONLY WE KNOW
Baby please, I miss you
Don't leave me crying here
I know sometimes I don't tell you
But please listen to my words and hear
Your THE REASON for my every thought
And that I've fallen IN TOO DEEP
No matter how hard I fought
Your heart has always been my HOME
I knew I'd found something special to keep
ON THE WAY DOWN to meet your soul
I want ONE MORE NIGHT,my heart weeps
Watching you leave is WHAT HURTS THE MOST
I love you and need you
SUDDENLY I SEE, that
I can't be without you
Baby don't leave, I WANNA LOVE YOU, please...
Author notes
I capped all the songs I incorporated, so they stand out. Sticky caps? If so I'll withdraw it or change it, whatever your preference.
In a list
A contest entry
- Music Titles Contest by Welcome-To-Hell.
875 points, ended April 12, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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WoooooooooooooooooHoooooooooo!!! you got gold from asswipe LMFAO AWESOME!!! w00t!! I am calming down...yeah AWESOME!!! Grats babe!!! You are my girl and you had better know it!! *does the dance of joy* heehee Nicely writen too babe!!
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LOL ILU CHICA! Hugsssssssssssssssssssss
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I Wanna LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU oh wait...I already do!! heehee *hugs you tight*
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Yes U do and ILU2!
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good write
loved the realization of desperate love and how you used the songs to punctuate this theme
really strong images of you waiting and talking your temper away and replacing it with the desire of the return of this person.
good real good
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Thank you =o) I wrote it for the contest. I love writing like that. It gives me purpose.. Most of my prewrite stuff i write on the fly. Things I feel in the moment. Most New stuff, non prewrites are for the contests.
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freaking awesome!! i like this
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This is great I liked how in the write you used a number of the titles excellent write best of luck to you in the contest
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This is AMAZING!! I love the way you incorporated the songs into the poem and it makes total sense. Great job! LOOOOOOVE it!
<3 Jenerali
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