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I'm sorry

I've built a ten foot wall
around my heart today
Someone got too close and I
exploded from inside out
Too many people
want to get close
I will not allow it
When someone gets too close
I have to back away
No one will get close to me
I've been hurt too mech
People surround me
Trying and failing to break down the wall
I trust no one
I know no one
I tell no one my secrets
good little emo kids
who are just like me
we let no one get close
Someone got too close today
I had to build the wall
It protects me from
the pain I will feel
if they get too close
it's too hard to take
when someone you love
turns their back on you
I just can't seem to make it come
I can not seem
to get the fact
that no one wants me there
They want me to go away
so I can feel alone
it is pointless
for me to try
to earn friends in this cruel world
I will stop
my hopeless heart
from loving any one else
I'm sorry

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  • X-xKillLifex-X
    April 2, 2007

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    this is terribly sorrowful... depressing even... but really made me feel for you... and i connected, this is wonderful

  • Heavenly Star
    March 29, 2007

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    This is a very sad and emotional poem you wrote here, you shouldn't feel like that though from letting people into your heart and trusting them, there is always someone out there who will stick by you through thick and thin and not hurt you, otherwise you will feel lonely with no friends building a wall is no good. Well written poem dear poet filled with lots of emotions