What will the future bring?
Sureley everyone has dreams
Realistic dreams
Fantastic dreams
Nightmares
And yet
It's up to us to make them come true
But what then is fate?
Author notes
Why the picture inspired that out of me I don't know, but there you are.
A contest entry
- Free Verse...But by masterblaster.
390 points, ended April 15, 2007, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hi, yes what indeed is fate, well Shakespeare wrote in Julius Caesar, the fault is not in our stars but within ourselves,lol, not sure if I agree with him,nice write, all the best in the comp, hugs Di
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good question
What is fate? Nothing but a man made thought, we create it. So we can change it. Dreams are a different line of thought completely dreams are thoughts that have yet to become actions which is why it is up to will power. It is up to ourselves to build our future from the foundation of the past.
Thank you for sharing and for your comment on my piece.
Always pen from the heart and you shall never write wrong
~SongByrd
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i like this a lot. great job.



