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because i try

"they'll love you when your gone"
that's what he would say
it's just that you're around
that makes it all this way

if there's truth in that
then i don't want to be
i can't stand these people
that can't stand shit with me

i write in utter distortment
under compliance with good-byes
i wonder what it'll be like
when i am buried to die

maybe they'll forgive me
or perhaps they'll forget
that the only person around for them
was the one me that they met

i loved so many people
and then they ran away
all because they're youthful
and stupid in some way

so vanish i must soon now
to escape such uneven pain
maybe i'll pass on to another life
instead of one so vain

forget about me
and the fact that i have tried
i'll do the same and waste you
because it's you that lied.

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  • ItalianPride09
    March 30, 2007
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    Deep!!!

    wow i like this poem i feel it understands me its great!!!


  • XXStOlEn-HaLoXx
    March 28, 2007

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    I love it, Yami! It's very deep but understandable to the intellectuals! lol beautiful!

    love alwayz n foreva
    :~:Tasha:~:


  • satanichybrid666
    March 28, 2007

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    this one makes me think of how i treat you and if i dont shape up somthing i dont want to happen could happen