"they'll love you when your gone"
that's what he would say
it's just that you're around
that makes it all this way
if there's truth in that
then i don't want to be
i can't stand these people
that can't stand shit with me
i write in utter distortment
under compliance with good-byes
i wonder what it'll be like
when i am buried to die
maybe they'll forgive me
or perhaps they'll forget
that the only person around for them
was the one me that they met
i loved so many people
and then they ran away
all because they're youthful
and stupid in some way
so vanish i must soon now
to escape such uneven pain
maybe i'll pass on to another life
instead of one so vain
forget about me
and the fact that i have tried
i'll do the same and waste you
because it's you that lied.
i dont like this one - do you?
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Deep!!!
wow i like this poem i feel it understands me its great!!! -
I love it, Yami! It's very deep but understandable to the intellectuals! lol beautiful!
love alwayz n foreva
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this one makes me think of how i treat you and if i dont shape up somthing i dont want to happen could happen


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i love you hubby
s i wont let things happen...so stop worrying.
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