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Summer's Day

Brown eyes drawn into green,
longing glances, mesmerising.
Love's reflection can be seen,
hot summer day, so tantalizing.

Sillouettes, wild flowers dance,
stem to sway in gentle breezes,
buds bloom among sweet romance,
morning dew on lips, so pleases.

Laid softly down on a daisy bed,
gazing into the morning sky,
longing for our needs to be fed,
in my arms hear passion's sigh.

Touch me like a summer breeze,
soft fingers upon bare skin glide,
now come into the garden please,
feel the flower bloom, open wide.

Fingers tremble, softly caress,
warm moist lips tenderly meet,
my love to you I must confess,
wanting more with each heartbeat.

Desire builds, our bodies press,
deep within me passion ignites,
feelings of pleasure seem endless,
as the flower blooms in delight.

Passion's strength slips inside
as we love the day away
there is no need for us to hide
on this beautiful summer day.

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  • Dalaney gold member
    March 14, 2008
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    whimsical beauty...this was my first thought after reading your poem. Second read made me shiver slightly. Shall I go for a third? love, lane


  • raingoddess gold member
    March 6, 2008

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    Beautiful

    This is a very beautiful poem, you have great use of metaphors and you paint the picture very well, I can see a couple making love on a warm summer day, holding nothing back, excellent write, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.

    raingoddess


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    March 6, 2008
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    WOW This is really Beautiful


  • poet2angels gold member
    February 21, 2008
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    This is gorgeous! Beautiful imagery and flawless, unforced rhyme...I love this!

    Lynda


  • delightfulmess silver member
    February 20, 2008
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    Awe... So soft and romantic.
    Well done Colin It is nice to meet you


    Delila

  • Liquid memories
    February 15, 2008

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    summers day, how loving and tender you have written this. very nice and touches the heart. now you need to wruite some new poems. all the best my friend.


  • Catressa gold member
    August 27, 2007
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    What a soft caress you whispered my friend..


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    July 13, 2007

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    Havent seen you around too much..Hope all is well.
    This was a beautiful piece..Very sensual and lustful..
    Great job..Hope to see more of your work..
    Soulful Woman


  • Dalaney gold member
    April 28, 2007

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    Colin...this is sooooo soft and sensual.
    I love this poem. It always gives me
    goosebumps when I read poetry this beautiful,
    and oh, how I wish I could fall right into it.

    Love, Lane


  • Desire gold member
    March 27, 2007
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    Wow-


    Oy~ this could melt some monitors
    Beautiful verse both of You have penned
    Love the exchange of energy between the
    Two of You and this leaves many images
    in the Mind~ Oh Yes it does

    Thank You for sharing this lover's Paradise~
    Many blessings to You both!
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Sacred Ground
    March 27, 2007

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    Wow! This is beautifully enchanting! Sultry and steamy from beginning to end. You guys did a great job with this! Hats off to ya!!

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