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--oHorrorPops--o /&&/ .::AcidDrops::.

Ps.ps.psycho girls and psycho boys
Little kids with psycho *toys*

Devious children w0rking on their .p.l.a.n.s. 
With their skate-shoes and their painted-Vans

*Smoking* p♥t in alleyways
Don’t you remember those .l.o.v.e.l.y. days?

Molestation /&&/ rock-cocaine
Absinthe enters my main vein

Drinking .w.o.r.m.w.o.o.d. oh-so-sweet
*Glitter*-girls, a savory-treat

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  • fallenangel671
    April 11, 2007

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    this is an awesome poem, i loved reading it, i loved how it describes teens today, keep writing!!!!

    ~Ashley~<3


  • xshotxinxthexheartx
    April 9, 2007
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    you drug me

    i love this way that you write...it keeps everything interesting and fresh...

    -xshotx


  • InfiniteCaitlin
    April 4, 2007
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    "Molestation /&&/ rock-cocaine
    Absinthe enters my main vein

    Drinking .w.o.r.m.w.o.o.d. oh-so-sweet
    *Glitter*-girls, a savory-treat "


    dahling.. you just blow me away!!!

    Absinthe!!

    you know what that is!

    babydoll you just keep amazing me!


  • Porcelain Princess
    March 30, 2007
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    I lovelovelove this poem. It's just amazing.

    lovelove;; Glitter

  • razorbladekisslove
    March 29, 2007
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    This poem is awesome.
    I love it.


  • bigXfatXemo
    March 28, 2007

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    Ooo!

    Pure bred emo brit brilliance strikes! Loved the overly overly rhymeingness of this poem. Yay for glitter too! I'm currently working on my glitter poetry, this one is awesome though =] Bravo!
    xXx


  • ninja girl 418
    March 28, 2007
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    omg i loved this! i wish i could right like this


  • KissMeGoodnight
    March 27, 2007

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    oh my god! u rock!!! this is so awesome...im starting a dirty pretty(!) contest! U BETTER CHECK IT OUT! lol


  • BArBiE slaPPed m3
    March 27, 2007
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    Awh. *Glitter*-girls, a savory-treat
    That's such aweome line. *swoons*
    xoxo,
    Anni


  • neon nightmares
    March 27, 2007

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    This is wicked. Sorry Icant think ofanything better to say, but I'm a littlebrain dead at the mo.
    Great write
    big grins
    thumbs up
    much luvs
    xxxx

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