Will I miss tomorrow
Like I loved today
I know pain and sorrow
Lasts more than one day
I don't care how much it hurt me
I was happy then
I'm hoping you will let me be
In love with you again
I know you can't make love with me
Or even share a kiss
Your concience just wont let it be
But that's not what I miss
I only want to smile again
And tremble when we touch
I just want to go back when
It didn't hurt so much
Author notes
type 3
A contest entry
- Types Of Love(NEED TYPE 1 BEFORE JUDGING) by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended March 31, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn My Frown Upside Down!! by Death Rocker.
335 points, ended October 7, 2008, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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Loved it so much. This is a great poem. I loved this part:
I only want to smile again
And tremble when we touch
I just want to go back when
It didn't hurt so much -
Perfect. I've been wanting to say that to a certain someone for the longest time. He's 8 years older than me and everyone's so protective so he stopped seeing me. This is a great piece.
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Awww, this is really sweet... as always wonderful job...
I remember when I wanted to tell someone something like this and well that's how I got the insperation for part of my poems...
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A lot of my poems are about the one lady i can't have.And TY for your cool words.
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