Brownies with chocolate chips
Lemon Meringue Pie
Apple crisp and fudge
Can all take a hike!
Give me some good ole candy
Delicious and so sweet
No sour gum for chewing
To knock me off my feet
I want a Chocolate Hershey Bar
So smooth, with creamy bites
Melting in my savory mouth
Oh! Milk chocolate delight!
Tantalizing ecstasy
Addictive to my soul
Every diet I've ever had
I’ve lost my self control
Nothing beats simplicity
Inhaling your cocoa scent
I can not get enough of you
You’re worth my very last cent!
Author notes
I love my Mr. Hershey! xoxo
I am a secret admirer so please don't use my name in commenting
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A contest entry
- Candy-Licious!! by Phoenix-Flame.
320 points, ended March 30, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ha,ha,ha!
I should have never read this one in front of my husband, he too is a Hershey addict! Now when he is missing I will know where to look. LOL He eats one huge Hershey bar every night while he watches the boob tube! I would seriously die if I ate that much chocolate! Excellent job.
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Thank you!
Oh Gosh... I don't think I could eat a BIG one everyday either.. just wouldn't settle all that well with my tummy and sleeping..lol
But I do have a love for Hersheys chocolate..
and love my M&M's too lol
Thanks for the wonderful comment.. so glad I could give you BOTH a smile!!!lol
Linda
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Another really fun write. That says something about the artist. I'm a chocoholic. I confess.
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hah. Great poem [insert name here]
. I myself prefer brownies over a hershey bar but both are still great. 
I might have to write a poem about brownies now in response to this! lol. I'll think about it if I have time later. Great job.
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This is a very good poem!!This makes me want somw chocolate!!UGH!!lol.goodluck!
<333Elhe93<333
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Yum-O!
OMG! That is such a delicious read! You got me lusting for chocolate now! Damn, I sure could use one right about now. I love all chocolate. I just don't care for the white chocolate. Pure chocolate is the way to go! 
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oooh, what a delicious write... but, now I'm craving chocolate ,lol, and I LOVE chocolate Very enjoyable and sweet write.
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MM MM MM GOOD!
really good this poem is. i can taste the things as i read. you really captured the meaning of this contest. good luck and best wishes
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mmmmmmm
YUMMY
We are so much alike..Thats my favorite too
I could do without everything else if I could just have those
Very sensually sweet poem
Lynda
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