Hello everyone,meet my best friend,
She has been, by my side, through thick and thin,
Sometimes, she knows my heart, better than I do,
I can always turn to her, when I need the truth,
She's my only confidant, of my hopes and dreams,
And a willing partner, in my crazy schemes,
She's my love, my happiness,
I've known her most of my life,
So say hello, everybody, to my loving wife.
A contest entry
- Anniversary by badddgirl.
450 points, ended June 10, 2007, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - BFF - FRIENDS to the END! by x Star Dust x.
500 points, ended August 19, 2007, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Friends With Benefits by star crossed.
310 points, ended September 25, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - True Feelings by live in love.
450 points, ended December 27, 2007, 28 entries
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Thank you for taking the time to write
for this contest. I appreciate your entry
and wish you the best of luck with it here!
Keep up the great work!
Jeremy0826 -
awwww this is soo sweet! Your wife is soo lucky!
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That is so sweet! I love this very much. Thank you for sharing it with me. Good luck in the contest!
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you made me go aaaaaaaaaaah Nice job! Excellent write!
Thanks for entering my contest - Great to have you here! -
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A touching tribute to your wife. I'm sure see me fly 2 will love it. Beautifully done. Lots of luck in our contest. Brian
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This was a very cute and touching write, it shows your affection for your best friend. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest!
Thanks & Love,
*MJ*
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I really liked this write, I think that it was a good flow. I loved how instead of the typical I love my wife becasuse... you made it come off as she's your best friend and then in the end stated she was your wife! Nice touch! THank you for entering this into my contest and best of luck to you!
Casey -
What an amazing poem! I absolutely love:
"And a willing partner, in my crazy schemes,"
That line made me smile so much!
Well done on an amazing poem!
Goodluck in the contest!
Emily x
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Thank You!!
Thank You immensely for this Beautiful verse
You have penned and I am Honored-
I Love verses that express
and the emotions shared for another
which can radiate with much energy...
Thank You for sharing Your Generous words,
bringing forth a smile
Love and Light Your way
Best wishes to You in the contest!
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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This is such a sweet tribute to your best friend, your wife. I hope she knows how lucky she really is to have you. Good luck to you in the contest. Take care.
Tali
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It is hard to write about your best friends and those that mean the most to you. It seems often the exact words do not come to you. This speaks volumes and I'm sure she will love every word of it.
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Wonderful!
Hello everyone,meet my best friend,
She has been, by my side, through thick and thin,
Sometimes, she knows my heart, better than I do,
I can always turn to her, when I need the truth,
Thank you very much!
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What a great read! Thanks for sharing, and best of luck in the contest that we are both in.
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Cute
This is a nice little thoughtful little poem on friends.
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Thanks
Thank you for your entry. I shall return with my final thoughts when the contest ends.
Tali
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too short. sorry man. and i wanted a story.
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Awww...
I love this...it proves something America doesn't really display in tv or movies any more, there is such a thing as a happy marriage....good write -
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Hi again. Thanks for the read and comment. I have been married for 27 years, since I was 16.You have a sweet smile. Bye love.
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Aww! This is so sweet. The last line is fabulous, didn't see it coming either!
And a willing partner, in my crazy schemes .. nothing's ever been said truer about a relationship!
How you get drawn into somebody's crazy ideas because you love them... You get involved.. You make contributions!
Really enjoyed this piece. Thankyou for entering and good luck in the contest! -
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Thank you for your read and comments. I hope it touched you. Check out my other work @jesseramsey. Its ok if I dont win, I write because I have to. Bye love.
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