I've been alone for oh so long
I don't even think it matters
I have no use for holding on
But there's no point in getting sadder
I'd almost kill to make her smile
She doesn't even know me
Just more pain and empty lies
Does this so-called life bestow me
Virgin lips and empty arms
Depression seems prevailing
Numbness seeping through my heart
As my senses turn to failing
Broken wings and teary eyes
Hold the heart that's hollow
While the pillow in the dark
Drowns the pain and sorrow
An imagery you get when you read this
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I love this.
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need a hug?
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So... who are you lying to? It's ok to tell Wessy. I have big ears and a wittle mouth. I would do lots of things to make you smile right now. If I could, I would. All the shoulda, coulda, wouldas aren't worth a damn when it comes down to it, but all the same they're there. You transformed your feelings into a sensational poem.
4EVER BEIN ME,
LOVE,
WESLEANN
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I don't understand.
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good, you put it on here
this isn't a very happy poem! por queee?
you really are an awesome writer though <3
keep doing it.
im gonna come visit you at work now...
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awww great poem. a image i get is sadness maybe. but yeah great poem i loved it.
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you have an amazing talent and i am so glad to see that you are back on AP writing again. The imagery in this is amazing and makes you think of a time when you dealt with something like this. the last stanza is great because its very full of raw emotion. Awesome Job here, sweetheart.
mandy
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Lonliness is a killer!
This one really got to me! So much said and very vividly I must say! You really made me sad! Kinda wrenched at my heart a bit! Made me go......Awwwwwww.....Very nice write! I loved the Rhyme!
Castaway
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The imagery in this poem
is beautifully dull. It has power.
This poem has power.
I love the last 2 lines.
They are a beautiful ending
to this piece.
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