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My First Day of School

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MY FIRST DAY OF SCHOOL


Backpack filled with everything on teacher's supplies list.

Heavy arms and weak legs from summer's lazy days.

Reluctant yet excited as I make my way up to my first class.

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  • bethan-gaze
    April 8, 2007
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    Now, this I can relate to ... congrats on the silver trophy!


  • serenity silvermoon
    April 3, 2007

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    wow

    i love my first day of school i get so excited but when i come home i never want to go back to school ever again but i know i have to for i am not aloud to quit even though i want to but i wont because i only have one more year and it would be stupid to quit now this was a great poem and like i said short and to the point is a good thing you are a great poet and cant wait to read more of your wonderful poems thanks for sharing and let God bless you and keep you forever and always love your sister dianna lee green forever and always


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    March 27, 2007

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    What a very accurate memory!
    You really took me back a
    few years with this one.
    Well done.
    Good luck in the contest.

    Jeannie


  • travis34dietC
    March 27, 2007

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    i really like this! that's exactly how i feel after every summer when i'm coming back to school.
    thanks for entering and good luck!


  • Rianna Bear
    March 27, 2007

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    Yes, a very exciting, yet terrifying time!!! loved the second line!!! it perfectly fit how we would go back after summer relaxation!!!

    *Rianna

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