Kiss me only one last time
You don't know
That I'm to end it tonight
When you kissed me goodnight
Tears filled my eyes
When you asked me what was wrong
I forced a smile and said I was alright
Admitting you have a problem is the first step
But enjoying it only ends in regrets
The little blue pills
I would never sell
Glide down my throat
So gently
So silently
So perfectly
I write this note
In the red lipstick
You always wiped off your mouth
Admit it
You were ashamed of me
Admit it
You knew this would happen
Admitting you never loved me
Is the first step
Kissing my so-called sleeping eyes
Is the last
You kissed my sleeping eyes
To you I was asleep
But to me I was gone
So far gone
So far away
I admitted it
Me being born was the first mistake
Author notes
wow. i got kind of carried away with a thought.
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Comments
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I have only one word for this poem OUTSTANDING!!! -Kevin
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Sad and dark. I just want to tell you not to feel that way but well it's not my place.
Full of emotions and questions, that go unanswered. Well said. Defective. -
Noteworthy
The depth and perception was what I loved most.
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unique
this peom is very intereting. i sually have read poems on suicide becasue of a love, not this situation. very vivid and good use of words. so u got carried away, ha? i think thats a good thing becasue u let ur thoughts out...they arent nesecarilly wat u truley feel but in ur mind they are floating up there!!it was a good poem. especially the thought of kissing someone goodnight but they are dying...kinda sad.
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