Day after day you try to pull through
but if your invisible, nobody sees you
despite my hopes, it has all been in vain
there was no use in causing this pain
I look in the mirror, but there is no reflection
It hurts even more, that I dont feel rejection
nothing, no hurtful actions or words
nothing at all, not a sound to be heard
I walked this earth, without a match for my heart
and with this notion, I shall now depart
I say good bye to nobody, the invisible have no friends
I will take this knife across my neck, closing eyes as it ends
no heads will turn as my hearse goes by
nobody cries when the Invisible die
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awesome
i understand it...i feel it...i love it!
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this was wonderful, emotion is my weakness and you have given me the tool to cry, i loved this poem
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deep
wow this is really deep and really good. keep it up! good luck!
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Very nice write.
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wow
amazing. sheer genius in words. an amazingly emotional deep and interesting poem. there is nothing more to say.
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