It was untill the end
to search
longing to feel
to find a friend
A dance in moonlight
to reveal
Hopeless anguish
no will to fight
Dance through sunlight
to our unanswered plight...
to deliverance
Waves crash upon my shore
to regret
a dream of you
to feel no more
So this is where we end
Carrion to rend
A lost flock to the Wolves
But you didn't know
to love
was it worth while
or some cheap show
coming closer now
to end
a short time spent
not to care how
A contest entry
- Pain, Without Love. by La Tua Cantante.
425 points, ended April 13, 2007, 36 entries
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Comments
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This is a wonderful poem! It's very well written, and has wonderful rhyming. I don't know what part I like the best. Extraordinary work. Good luck in my contest.
-La Tua.
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Your words are well-chosen.
Great flow, I think, and I love the title; it just seems to tie it all together.
Great work.
Keep it up.
Lady H -
I really like the spaces where a simple pause or breath is implied.
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