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My Cat, Percy

Percy has his winter coat
All big and wiry.
It hides his steely sinews
So that you cannot see.

Percy's eyes are shining orbs
Bluer than the sky,
They make you think of summer days
And birds soaring up high.

Percy's home is made of wood
All cut and shaped just right.
It has some carpet on the floor
Where Percy sleeps at night.

Percy is a flame point cat,
Which means he's mostly white.
His ears and tail are orange, though,
Oh, he's a lovely sight.

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Hello world!
That's not a picture of Percy, by the way.

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  • toomysterious
    May 21, 2008
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    Beautifully descriptive poem about your cat.


  • Amaranth Dihdzere
    April 5, 2007

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    This was so adorable,I loved it and you described your cat so well.I loved the last paragraph,it was a great way to end a poem.Well later.
    SEE NO EVIL,HEAR NO EVIL,SPEAK NO EVIL.


  • iamlost gold member
    March 26, 2007

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    MEOW!

    Aww, this is so CUTE! little squirrel, this is one of your best on here, I love it! The rhythm and flow work very well, as does the rhyming. And it's the perfect description of Percy. I especially love the lines "Percy's eyes are shining orbs
    Bluer than the sky,
    They make you think of summer days
    And birds soaring up high,"
    They work very well, actually I love the entire poem, everything just works very well. VERY CUTE AND VERY GOOD!