Dear lance, and neal ,
At camp it may seem i'm a very happy young girl but as everyday goes on that i'm not by one of yall or at camp i drown.Drown in a pool of floating bodies and hands reaching for me up to this point i've been anle to tread the surface going under a few times. You see those scars on my arms arn't form a cat or tree they are from a knife as long as can be.I've tied belts around my neck and pulled then i'd stop and think of yall.Then i'd unlash the belt and hide it hoping to never be found again.
But today my mother died,then my father and all i did was laugh, that can't be right can it?Then after getting ride of them i killed my cat who i love more then anything else then my dog lusafur. I JUST COULDN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE OK!!! so when i was done i ran up to my room and begun this letter then i saw that knife again i slowly took it and plunched it into my hearttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt HELP ME
A contest entry
- Suicide notes by LifeEndsNow.
450 points, ended April 6, 2007, 11 entries
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Comments
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suicidal tendencies...weird rhyming but cool never the less
thanx for entering -
I'm sorry.
Please remove this "note" because this contest is for Poems. This would be considered a story like refferance. Sorry for the inconvience.
Jess -
didn't do too much for me because the grammer is horrible and there are no lines it's more like a paragraph which isnt much for my taste...but either was thx for entering
~keep writing~
~crazy~
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wow this was a very powerful poem, great with anger
hate, saddness, everything you'd find in a last note
to someone, i loved it, but i kept glancing at the
personal tag on this, i would like to tell you that
i hope that if anything is wrong, that my door
is always open to listen talk or whatever okay?
but this was a very good write, great job and good
luck -kevin
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