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This is for you

Why do we play this game...
Round and round the merry-go-round...I'm tired of this so lets call it quits!!!
I gave you my heart and found it the next day...
lying on the road were you just threw it away.
So I'm going to find heaven or hell whichever will have me because you never will.
I would cut my heart out but i cant so i will just cut my wrists.
But before i must go i must say goodbye....oh wait i forgot nobody cares!
I thought i might take with me that bastard of your boyfriend but i cant cause you pain to you like you do to me.
So I'm gonna go down this old cursed road.
The blade is ready all nice and sharp.
Oh wait i think i see my ride here...but i have one last sunrise because thats all I'm gonna miss.
So goodnight and farewell my dear emptiness.

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  • SilentlyAlive
    March 29, 2007

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    Farewell your dear emptiness indeed, this was a
    very good poem, i really liked it i wish you the best of luck in my contest, emotion beauties gun -Kevin


  • SpacedOut
    March 27, 2007
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    hey even i told u last night tis is a good peom with a lot of meaning. sad to. so he