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[ Nick. ]

Nick.

Did you ever love me?
Did you ever even care?!?
I promised you my love, but you've gone and left me here!
I told you I needed you.
You left me crying on the floor.
I'm sick of all the hurt and sick of all the pain...
tonight my blood will drain.
I gave you enough time...
and more then enough ways.
I was yours and no one elses, ruined for any other,now I feel like a whore...
The only kiss that will ever be sweeter then yours, is the kiss of this blade.
I love you..loved you...
I don't know anymore.
what the fuck am i even writing this for?
I'll lay here and die under an amber sky...
but, dont worry ...
I know you won't cry.
I was nothing to you and now I'll be nothing to anyone...
except the worms in the ground.
Fuck you you asshole.
This is it good bye.

Gina

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  • LifeEndsNow
    March 29, 2007
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    Emotion, a beautfiul word when we think of it,
    This was a very well written and powerful piece you
    have written here, I thank you for taking the time
    to enter my contest and I wish you the best of luck
    on this and everything you do in life -kevin


  • campslack
    March 26, 2007

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    i really like this poem but do you think that you could change the background so its easier to read. unless it was your intention to let only those who REALLY tried to read it. anyway good job