My friends always tell me
I am very strong
But for some reason
I feel they are wrong
If i was strong
I could make it through all of this
All that, that started
With that assholes kiss
I have been weak
Since the stuff with jaysin
Tears have been shead tremendously
Without hesitation
Life has been hard
After loved one's died
After friends have gone
Tears, more have been cried
Seeing my dad
And the way he has been
Pushing my mothers memory away
Making me feel my time was at an end
My mother died
When i was but a baby
My father never cared
He just abandoned me
I have gone through a lot
More than people know
Everytime i tell my story
There tears always show
This is why
I hide myself away
To keep anyone from hearing the story
And listening to what i had to say
My life hasnt been fun
Most of my friends know that
But some still yet to learn
Of what a horrible life i have had
I am not going to say no more
Because i would give all of my life away
So if you want to know more
Come and i will tell you all there is to say
Please tell me what you think
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Very good
A sad story told very simply yet in a very moving way.
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Wow... This was deep and powerful. Nobody should ever have to go through all that. I'm here for ya if you ever need to talk hun. Great write though. *hugs* -Nick
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thanks nick
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Wow
First of all I want you to know that you are a very strong person to go through what you have been through. And yes it is always hard after a loved one dies....although I have no Idea about losing a mother I did lose a best friend. I just want you to know you will always have me even though that might be more of a burden...lol. Anyways, This was a very deep poem and thank you for sharing it with me.
Love Ya,
Dad (Luke)
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Thank you so much for commenting on my poem dad. and i appriciate that very much
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