First day gets your heart pumping;
Adrenaline rushing, everything's bigger:
A bug to be crushed under the heel of the high-school's shoe
A contest entry
- 3 line poems about your First Day Of High School by travis34dietC.
300 points, ended April 8, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Awesome! Haiku, right?
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Not really, but I bet I could make it into one!
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i like the description in the first two lines and the metaphore in the last line though i'm not looking forward to being "a bug to be crushed under the heel of the high-school's shoe" next Septmember
good job!
thanks for entering and good luck!
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