And If I Bleed, I’ll Bleed
Knowing You Don’t Care
Raising The Gun
Pulling The Trigger
It’s All Over Now
I Can’t Even Remember...
You Told Me Not To
You Said, “Don’t Die”
I Couldn’t Promise Anything
But I Said That I’d Try
But Look What’s Happened Now…
I’ve Lost The Strength
I’ve Lost The Will
I’ve Lost The Battle
Been Destroyed By War
Ripped At The Seams
Left Alone, Apart
I Scream A Silent Scream...
Raising The Gun
Pulling The Trigger
It’s All Over Now
I Can’t Even Remember…
Another Teen Dead
Lost And All Alone
Ended His Life
He’ll Never Go Home
And One Note Was Found
Pinned To His School Tie
One Final Record
One Last Goodbye
One Final Record
Of What Went Through His Mind...
“On That Bullet I Engraved Your Name
So That You’ll Forever Know
That You Were The Last Thing
Ripping Through My Brain...”
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wow you got talent! the way ur poem made me feel it was just so amazing, you are very good i want to read more from u!
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amazing!! i absolutely love this piece! you have major talent. and thanks for writing about something so controversial! be back for more good stuff!
~erica~
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Very nice i have an icon tht says something to the effect of the last line very good work.
Ashley
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Tommy, again such a powerful piece, your ability to put these emotions and feelings into words still amazes me, keep in writing so I can keep on reading
cathy
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ello..
guess what? i named this poem.
.oh yeah go me..
anyways.. i lyk it altho i wont b able 2 look at ur scool tie agen..
lol
yes well weve both felt like this lately and i guess yeah..
ttyrn (talk to you right now since ur beside meee))
Cazza
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oh n u cant die. id die then.
xox
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