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No Idea

Do I love you
Or do I just lust you
I've got no idea
Its beyond my comperhension
I've love/lusted you for three years
I just hope that you feel the same way too

When you smile
And I just don't believe
That you're real

I know you do
You do like me
The way I like you

I can feel it deep in my bones
But I just can't make the move
I can't
I'm afraid of the outcome
If I'll just end up glum
And all alone again

I'm so afraid
Because I have no idea
I have no idea
If you like me at all
If you even care

I hope you do
Because I love you
Because I lust you
Because of everything about you


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  • PoeticFlame
    April 11, 2007
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    hey this one was pretty good. I liked this one because I've been there so many times. There have been so many guys that I liked that I could never tell and so I never knew if they liked me in return. You did a nice job on this one. It was a good poem.


  • Myjoy gold member
    March 26, 2007
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    Nice and a good contrasted between the two. Well said.