Orange, Yellow, Purple, Blue
Technicolor Dreams
Self-kept dreams
Drifting on the waves ashore
Falling through the trees
Complaints
Restraints
Conscious screams
Washed away and cleansed of sins
Close your eyes and slice your wrist
Sit and watch the blood pour out
Sew it up and put it away
The Hate, The Ache
Enduring the pain
What's left is in the past
Sane or insane
Slipping away
Reality's this way
My world array
Alone, in dismay
Don't take love for granted
Take life for granted
Human flesh reveals the color
Technicolor Dreams
My distress
Heart felt bitterness
Ate away at your sins inside
Outside the demons lurk
Take your soul but not your love
Take your hope but not your faith
Love and faith devour the clouds
Sorrowful nights
Horrible fights
What you do at this very moment
Makes the future and creates the past
Orange floats away
Yellow squeezes by
Purple fills the sky
Blue pushes its way through
Halt my misery
Compensate me
Breathing eternally
Technicolor Dreams
Lies all inside your head.
Author notes
I did this one day when I was bored its two of my poems put together..I dunno..well enjoy? lol
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This was a very good poem. You've definitely grown as a writer. I wonder when you're going to log back on and write some more! Goodness.
But yeah, the imagery in this piece was very vivid and colorful (no pun intended). Your vocabulary has also grown extensively.
I miss you a lot. Write again soon, so you have more to share with us! lol. Love your wonderful, and conceited brother, Justin. :-P -
WOW
This is fantastic !!!!!!!!!!
I love the use of the colours & the flow of this write and just everything about it ...
Absolutely fantastic !
Be very proud of this unique and interesting write
Stay safe
~Amanda
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