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Fucking liar.

You've lied to me.
- More than once, I can tell,
and those things about true love:
they can all go to hell!
For these tears I feel-
that swell with every breath-
For you'll never see
I swear on my death.
But it wasnt just that you did
that you tried,
It was all the hurt that came when I found out you lied
you went out of your way,
to hurt me,
to lie.

And yet I wouldnt understand
how a love could this come to be
but I guess she was right
I just couldnt see
you're a fuck up.
and worthless...
for all that you've prayed against
so screwy,
just dirtless.

And I cant seem to know why these stupid song hurt
so much.
they're just silly love songs...
and every time , now that they play
those same tears well up and burn me
like a whore led to water
yet her conscience led astray.

And I cant help but wonder;
What else was there to lie about.
was there more hurt in playing some game thats come out
you've preyed upon my only love that I've given
yet I cant seem to take what left you unforgiven

I still stand up to my friends for you...
and I'm not exactly sure why
but I think that I grew.
More girl than you know,
more woman than seen
I've finally understood what it takes to be seen
above more than body
and curves pretty shapes that demeen.
I've found what I've hidden
I have what it takes.
so you cant beat me
and you  wont ever win
you're just a stilly boy, who lied for his sin.

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  • bbblond6977
    March 6, 2008
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    I feel it..

    I have had this experience. Thank you for putting it in words for me and sharing it.

  • Britishkid
    September 6, 2007
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    my favorite, loved the analogies


  • BeautifullyBroken17
    April 24, 2007
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    Great

    you did a really good job


  • Mr Lunar Hyde
    March 29, 2007

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    I like this a lot. I think it would have been better if the rhyme scheme was consistant but other than that it's a good poem. Enjoyed reading.